Tuesday, April 26, 2011

Rain

Note to audience: I AM NOT DEPRESSED!!!!!! I just have very sad poetry. T_T  But seriously, how do you write a happy poem without it sounding fake and cheesy?  I can only write sad poems... if you can give me tips for my poetry - ie, how to make happy poems - I'll gladly take any advice that you have!

I find the rain depressing
It demonstrates how pure emotions are
For even the gods shed tears
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As the gods sheds tears
We shed ours
Is that as close as we may be?
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The hole in the sky
That only I can see
Is swollen in the rain



I don't have much time this week!  I'll do the best I can.  I hope you like my scattered thought of rain!  See you tomorrow!

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